Order # 142704 needs minor revision
The Talking Points document is single spaced and cannot exceed one page. You should include the bill name and number, and a brief description of the bill, followed by 6-8 talking points which includes data specific to $, %, #’s, etc. Use headings to introduce/identify content of each bullet/point (for example: national data, regional data, etc. – see rubric).
Each talking point must have a different/separate reference cited for each talking point. If you have 6 bullets, you need 6 references listed on reference list. References must be timely.
The below 3 bullet points do have specific to $, %, #’s,. please revise and update ASAP
*In extreme cases, patients are unable to fully concentrate at their working places as a result of illness or other complication. This leads to loss of working hours and days since they have to use their pay time off medical attention. As a result, it hinders economic growth due to low productivity. To some extent, some patients risk losing jobs due to prolonged absence from work.
*It is projected that the bill will be beneficial to patients with terminal illnesses and medical conditions upon approval. The bill if passed will enable patients to receive marijuana for treatment, prevent frequent seizure activities and improved quality and life expectancy for many patients.
*Finally, the bill gives guidelines that will ensure mandatory registration of patients and providers. This will enhance responsibility and accountability in the use of marijuana treatment.
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